Are You Serious Jo Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 I LOVE good HDR and found the perfect subject, a fruit store at Woodside. I shot between showers as I wanted the freshness of the air and wet road to set off the building. I think I'll redo and lighten a bit as the print was a bit dark and I still didn't get the horizon right. Be super critical! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
persephone Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 I don't know enough about it to comment , just it is one of the few HDR that I actually like :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Are You Serious Jo Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 You can comment on composition etc and to be honest it's the first HDR I've done so I'm a beginner at it as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyCresties Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 Not the hugest fan of HDR I'm afraid, and the first thing I noticed was the halo round the trees and the giant apple (?). It's an interesting subject though, and I'd like to see perhaps a closer shot of the right hand side of the shop :) You did say super critical Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Are You Serious Jo Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 Super critical makes things improve :D The sky was a bit of a hard one because it did have different amounts of grey cloud behind the trees and I was a bit reluctant to mess with that. But I'll go in on closer view and see if I can sort any haloing with some burning. You get so focused on some things you forget to check others :laugh: I also have to remember that I don't have full frame and need to zoom out more as I lost the features on the left. I do have some close ups of the right side shop, might play around with those on the weekend and post them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
huga Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 (edited) I find the little aplle (?) thing on the bottom left distracting. Could you crop or clone him? ETA I can't really see a halo - just different patches of cloud in the sky. Edited June 8, 2012 by huga Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Are You Serious Jo Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 The little sign on the left really annoys me too, I had it in the viewfinder but cut off due to lack of full frame. Next rainy day I'll head back to see if I can repeat it. I didn't have haloing jump out at me but thought it might be just not visible on this monitor. It was a patchy sky so I know some of what may look like haloing is just that, but I'll look at it closely to check. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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